I liked the story enough to overlook the poor writing that would pop up and finish the book.
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I read it as a free download on my Kindle The story line was well thought out, with a few good surprises, but the writing itself was a bit amateurish. There are some obvious errors in the author's thinking which I won't go into (so I don't spoil the book), but they aren't big enough to be a problem. I didn't waste my time reading this book. The story line was well thought out, with a few good surprises, but the writing itself was a bit amateurish. The third person omniscient could have worked here, if the transitions weren't quite so jerky and the descriptions better.more *yawn* for a story with as many people dead as there are here, there is shockingly little drama. Everyone liked them, everything they tried worked, and so three unknowns defeat the armies and evil sorcerer and become two Dukes and the most powerful wizard in the land, yay! And the peasants rejoice. ok? Characters had challenges but they somehow managed to not be challenging. I mean we're talking, "An arrow hit Sarc in the forehead and he fell dead." Uh. like a narrator describing a scene, and never as if it was actually happening. The dialogue was entirely stilted and felt like watching Nickelodeon where actors act at the screen/audience and never to/with each other. And by learned a lot I mean that it had a pretty nice, if standard, core plot, moved along, had a good amount of action and still.
I mean we're talking, "An arrow hit Sarc in the fore I learned a lot about writing with this book. I learned a lot about writing with this book.
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